Feedback Received Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Feedback Received



Why is that fools,
Go out of their way...
To be noticed?
It's like someone requesting to sing a solo,
In a church choir.
And that person couldn't hold a note,
If it was wrapped in silk...
And placed upon a silver plate,
With handles attached to it!

And yet,
Fools will take it upon themselves to irritate,
For the attention given.
Regardless if the feedback received...
Is an entire crowd of people,
Turning their backs...
For fear of showing anything,
Remotely expressing...
Encouragement.

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