Manonton Dalan

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Feeling New


why do i feel tired after
knowing she is okay; happy
was it i am in reality now
that i keep denying myself
lots of rest; over thinking
blocking out numerous ifs

i laid flat on my back quiet
then i thought of cleaning
anything around me, dust enemy
all papers i collected, thrown
i even scrub corners with soap
my shoulder sore; i feel fresh

Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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