Feeling Of First Poem by Kamna Saini

Feeling Of First

Rating: 4.8


First is the step which lead you for a height
First is the courage to live life gracefully
First is the respect which grows by steps
First is the feeling which opens the door of opportunities
But for this first feeling you have to see yourself, know yourself
respect yourself and motivate yourself
May be you down
May be you cry
May be u feel alone
But its all about the feeling of first
So go through the feeling of first
And find yourself in the world of first
This is the pleasure of first.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subham Dutta 04 September 2008

Every day is the first day of your life. Good poem.

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Rocketter Man 05 September 2008

Hi.. Good one... Nice thoughts...

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Faiz Khan 05 September 2008

itz very good. i liked ur poem very much

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 September 2008

Fine composition....................10

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

The structure designed for this piece is excellant and it really helps convey the message of the writer. The writer sure knows what she wants to do, and she does it well. Her communication skills are not the best. She doesn't let that stop her. This is something to be admired. I think she must be a good teacher. GW62

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Kamna. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Neetha Sasidharan 06 January 2012

yes! ! we should come out of our comfort zones.... gud poem...

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

fine structure/ a good poem! ! ! ! 10+++

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David Threadgold 28 September 2008

A wonderfully well thought through poem.well done.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Excellent is the form, and so is the content. Beautiful poem.

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