Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

Fiasco - Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Vitality consumed
Body feels droopy
It is a mind seizure
Makes you loopy.



(6/29/2009)


Comments about Fiasco by Sameer Ahmed

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/29/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    this is sort of amusing read... bro..
    i liked this one...

    with lvs
    shan (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Yelena M. (7/12/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    A very true to life poem, Sameer. Adore the language you choose, as always :)
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christopher Flynn (7/10/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    This is how I feel each day after work.. My life is a Fiasco this I know

    Woderfull poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (7/10/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    Good one Sameer. It's like when we run out of steam in the afternoon after a frantic busy day.
    I love the word 'loopy'. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (7/4/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    The way we think determines how we feel,
    the way we feel can determine how we think.
    Wise thinking. Bob Blackwell (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (7/3/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    We all have days like this. You are in good company, Sameer.
    10, of course.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (7/2/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    oh So thats my problem Doctor Sameer... Like it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (6/30/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    truth of knight in a very shinning armor of your thought....splendid
    as its hover in my mind....a poem switch on as medicine of the dream
    fantastic my friend….Gods bless... a10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Susmita tamang (6/30/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    its true..well written (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,012 Points Saadat Tahir (6/29/2009 2:47:00 PM)

    oops...! did it again
    meaningful and resides at the level of the reader...

    cheers (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009


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