(28/4/65 / Lincoln England)

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Fiendish Little Circles

Following footsteps
faintly in the snow,
I've got the scent
I know which way to go.

Fiendish little monster
smells like food.
Over fields, into woods
I look behind every tree.

The scent is strong
I expect it will jump out,
I hear myself breathing
whilst quietly looking about.

Suddenly in my face
a smiling circle with a frown,
I smack him over the head
terminally beat him down.

Left in excited shock
I'm ready to eat,
starting at the bottom
with its candy flavoured feet.

I feel other monsters
watching from afar,
eyes blinking in the darkness
little bar stewards!

Submitted: Sunday, June 28, 2009


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  • Martin O'Neill (4/6/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    sounds like an Easter Egg hunt on Acid. Loved it.

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  • Rachel Ann love, love, love and life Butler (11/8/2009 3:38:00 PM)

    'Starting at the bottom
    with its candy flavoured feet.'

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Ruth Walters (7/12/2009 3:59:00 AM)

    Wow! This is evil depicted but don't we all indulge ourselves without the kill at Asda's and Sainsburys; -) Really good and interesting poem which kept my interest all the way through, in fact I'm going to read it again!

    Ruthy

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  • Carol Gall (7/3/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    LOLOL THIS IS GOOD and u said u coulnt write

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