Fiery Rage Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Fiery Rage

Rating: 4.8


your glare painfully slices through
growling your words cut so deep
slicing me to tiny miserable pieces
as you speak of my many failures
your temperature rapidly rises
consuming fiery rage overtakes
your anger too quickly boiling
its burning me completely again
reminding me how im deserving
pain searing through me entirely
as your angry hands steal worth
leaving me broken and scarred
reducing me to merely ashes
to be scattered at your command
used and tossed aside by your will
trying to quench your burning temper
loosing all fight, struggling to stay alive
your strong flame still continues to thrive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 27 November 2011

A very sad, and truly beautiful poem. I loved it! ^_^

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Ebi Robert 10 December 2011

this is full of poetic magic.

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(De Va) 30 November 2011

My dear fragile heart, you graced me from the start, you showed me favor of which I savor, To protect you is my desire to rescue you from the fire But alas, tis not my choice but merely my small voice Blessings dear lady....healing and loving blessings to heal your soul.....smiles. Angel

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Cosmic Dreamer 29 November 2011

Sometimes you just have to let the fires of rage burn... Turn your back upon them and walk away to brighter future... Rage does not live within the heart of all men, for some men love shall conquer all rage... Another beautiful poem... Peace and love always...

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Marieta Maglas 28 November 2011

These poetic words express very well the fiery rage- a very sad poem 10

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Dave Walker 28 November 2011

Very powerful, you can feel the pain when you read it. A fantastic poem.

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