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Mamta Agarwal (10/6/2009 4:12:00 AM)
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if eyes are so formed
why is the formless heart so near
lovely poem Bhaswat, am, glad opened your page and read this gem of a poem.
you have so beautifully expressed questions that rise in our mind, fill us with a sense of wonder...
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Mamta
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Nikunj Sharma (8/18/2009 7:05:00 AM)
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who knows, what hppened
who knows what shall happen
who knows...what shall remain
words...love...ur poems...
good write bhaswat
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Indira Babbellapati (6/16/2009 4:53:00 AM)
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Who knows what happened
When nothing was to happen
Who knows what happens
When everything is to happen!
nice lines...no one really knows!
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thisoul ofmine (6/15/2009 6:33:00 PM)
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Yet another good write from a great poet.
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Christina Phan (6/15/2009 12:17:00 PM)
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a fanastic poem
i luv it
10+
keep it up
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C. P. Sharma (6/11/2009 3:09:00 AM)
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Beautiful poem. Beauty tracks from the form to the formless.
CP.
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Noel Horlanda (6/11/2009 2:26:00 AM)
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I like the first stanza, seemed to connote a bright, colorful life in canvas in the form of flowers in a vase. Speaking of spirit too, surely they are formless for they are without bodies. The author has great imagination a qualification and a requirement for being a poet. Again in this piece of work the lines are understandable, perfect in description in short nicely penned. Thanks
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Kayla Daley (6/10/2009 11:47:00 PM)
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Very Good i enjoyed it lots of imagery thats great
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L.P. Alexanders (6/10/2009 11:17:00 AM)
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meaningful word
keep up the good work!
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Carol Gall (6/9/2009 11:39:00 PM)
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nice flowing words...
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