Brian Dorn

Rookie (1965 / United States)

Five Fingers - Poem by Brian Dorn

Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined


Comments about Five Fingers by Brian Dorn

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/15/2007 5:37:00 AM)

    It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Michael Fischer (4/29/2007 1:59:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks!
    -Michael (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melvina Germain (2/16/2007 12:04:00 AM)

    Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandy Jensen (2/10/2007 12:47:00 AM)

    so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points jack russell (1/7/2007 8:56:00 AM)

    Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved!
    Best wishes.
    jack (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Not a member No 4 (12/10/2006 5:24:00 PM)

    Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arti Chopra (12/6/2006 12:58:00 AM)

    absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much.
    I love this poem..well done Bryan
    Arti (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gregory Gunn (11/14/2006 5:58:00 PM)

    Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Christine K. Trease (11/2/2006 7:49:00 AM)

    Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathy Anderson (10/3/2006 5:12:00 PM)

    Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Naylor (9/30/2006 9:51:00 PM)

    An enchanting poem! I enjoyed it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melvina Germain (9/29/2006 12:06:00 AM)

    I've always said along with others, Good things come in small packages. This is a wonderful poem Brian.

    Melvina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynne Bc (8/12/2006 1:06:00 AM)

    Loved this Brian.
    Thanks for this wonderful thoughts.
    Cheers, Lynne (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Root (7/16/2006 4:24:00 PM)

    Hi Brian, I love your poetry, it is light and fun. You sound like you are happy soul. Excellent poem take care. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Diana Poems (7/11/2006 1:04:00 PM)

    Beautifully written. Lovely imagery and very compassionately done. Very nice, thanks! Keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (7/6/2006 4:26:00 PM)

    Truly great poetry here. 10 for sure! -chuck (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,467 Points john tiong chunghoo (7/6/2006 10:47:00 AM)

    two boats of bliss sailing through universe. good one brian. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aisha Sherazi (7/5/2006 9:22:00 PM)

    Wow. Sorry, cliche I know, but wow. Peace, Aisha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Linda Ori (7/4/2006 11:51:00 AM)

    Ah - hand holding - nearly a lost art. Very sensual and connecting. Wonder why more people don't do it? You elevate the art to a beautiful place - wonderful and adoring write.
    Linda (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (7/4/2006 7:01:00 AM)

    Awww, sweet, sweet, sweet. And without being saccherine too. Great stuff Brian.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 22, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, August 9, 2010


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