Flower Poem by Sunny Rose

Flower

Rating: 2.3


I once saw a flower
On top of a hill
I watched as it blooms
Through rain and sunshine
It's petals, soft and smooth,
Silky and bright, nothing alike
Caught my eyes as i walked by
The body, so tender, full of green,
Fresh like spring, sprouted gently
From the dead, hardened earth
I once saw a flower
And i walked by

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem has two meanings- literal and metaphor. The literal meaning is simple.I saw a beautiful flower on top of a hill, admire it's beauty and walk away.The metaphor meaning is simple for everyone to relate but it may be a little difficult to understand.Let me explain a little.
The flower is a beautiful girl.On top of a hill means she's rich or great or her status is higher than mine.Then i went on to describe it's beauty and in the last 3-4 lines i said that something about dead, hardened earth meaning that her background or boyfriend or family was there beside her or simply i saw her with her cold boyfriend.So i just watched and admire her beauty and walked away
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 03 September 2012

Wow! ! How secret it is.....but i see this refers to your girlfriend! ! Your poem becomes lively because of beautiful metaphors!

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Sunny Rose 03 September 2012

Eindaray thnk u But that poem isn't about my girlfriend It's about that beautiful girl i saw but couldn't do anything about it coz she either has some cold boyfriend or her heartless parents. But i'm just glad that you read my poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Silly and bright! With the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Aung Si 10 September 2012

Wonderful idea! Sunny Rose compose about flower.Good job!

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Kelvin Owusu 06 September 2012

i honestly love your work, nicely written here

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Sunny Rose 05 September 2012

Thank u very much i'll keep writing more

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Sagar Shelar 05 September 2012

Sunny shines........ I'm really happy with your work.

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