Flutter In The Breeze Poem by Rini Shibu

Flutter In The Breeze

Rating: 3.7


The light inside me started to glow
As the love upon me you bestowed
Freshness that lasts long
Fragrance that goes beyond
The expectation you have never thought of
Showers on you without any cause
Blossoms of life flourish lifetime
A garden for you not just at springtime
Where you flutter in the breeze
And this feel I wish to never cease

Tuesday, February 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 04 February 2020

the breeze of spring coming and coming awakening the heart of love thoroughly

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 August 2020

the glowing of inner light is evident dear

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 17 March 2020

Beautiful imagery. " Where you flutter in the breeze And this feel I wish to never cease" , such a beautiful and poetic expression. Loved reading this.

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Captain Cur 14 February 2020

A lovely write! I can feel the love you have written fluttering in a breeze of words.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 February 2020

Anyone who is love flutters in its breeze birds flutter through their wings, a woman uses her silky hairs and man waiting for some more eclairs.

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Savita Tyagi 08 February 2020

Lovely poem so full of love and its expetations. Very poetic expressions.

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