chrysanthemums fly
swaying to the sky
footsteps of memory
in a white veil
your image
flow slowly
a half rainbow
embroidered with joy
dreams cross the frozen pond
your Spring devotion
will rise and sparkle
reaching afar shores
not yet midnight
phoenix spreads
shining wings
clear and simple
(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Obed Dela Cruz)
Beautiful imageries of a strong imagination. Really a great write.10.
wow! the melodic flow of words, dance with the lyrics of thought...i like to read.... makes my day complete....thank you for sharing this lines.... God bless my friend...a 10 +
very nice my pick a half rainbow embroidered with joy ...beautiful imagery...classical good job cheers
I loved each word in this footnote! so natural/ a beautiful dedication! 10+++ Thanks For Sharing
you know sir, I think I have read this before and made a comment but I have not seen/noticed the dedication. Wow! Thanks sir! Thanks a lot sir! but i just don't get it a little bit. I am just curious on why is it called 'footnote' and why does it describe a flower? I know poems are made of figuratives sometimes but I can't sometimes understand it. Anyway, sir your poems 'myth' are good!
beautiful words expressing your sentiments to a poet friend. The images and metaphors are striking! a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice words and nice poem too...anyways i like your way in writing :) thank you...