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For All The Words Dished Up - Two For Emily Dickinson

1

For all the words dished up,
A plate without meat. Maybe, bone.
No love fattened you,
never used your flesh.
Green as grass you stayed.
Dauntless, no narrow fellow passed.

2

This talk of death, dear Emily,
I know it intimately - plain talk
describes it best, as you know,
this Mystery grotesque -
concreteness like tombs hard in
the eye or that slant of light
obscured by a fly.

OK. It's done now. And ever will be,
for all the words in green
afternoons cannot evade mortality -
and soul no more than that butterfly be,
I laugh to call it Eternity that waits
beneath this plank, that other room
where a coach kindly stopped,
dropped you, yellow wing, still and
dark, now daunted and alone.

Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009
Edited: Monday, February 08, 2010


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  • Lauren Greenspan (1/7/2010 2:47:00 PM)

    Firstly, thank you for your kind words on my own poem. They are much appreciated. Secondly, this is beautiful. 'No love fattened you' The imagery kills me. Remarkable. Thanks for posting.

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  • Nimal Dunuhinga (12/29/2009 2:24:00 PM)

    A full stop.

    She begged!
    At lest before the New Year
    Eradicate this unnecessary punctuation mark
    From the life sentenced.

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