Warren Falcon

Rookie - 284 Points (04/23/52 - xxxx / Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA)

Autumn Haiku


Even from my front porch
the rusted sewing machine
yearns for golden thread.

Submitted: Thursday, December 17, 2009
Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010

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  • Gold Star - 9,723 Points Heather Wilkins (10/10/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    a nice choice of words and a good metaphor (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,723 Points Heather Wilkins (10/10/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    a nice choice of words and a good metaphor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/10/2011 12:07:00 AM)

    What an excellent haiku. The sewing machine resembling our life's pattern and the golden thread the people who keep us together... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Baru Gobira (8/3/2010 1:44:00 PM)

    Not too sure what it all means in its entirety. But that is exactly the beauty of a true Haiku of which I'm no expert. I liked it. Baru Gobira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (3/12/2010 3:46:00 AM)

    Autum is the season of mellowed fruifulness, when the leaves too change into rustty colors and golden hues! Let this golden thread of Nature run through our
    matured Autumnal life, being close to Nature is the better way to survive!
    Thank for sharing!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,489 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/5/2010 2:16:00 PM)

    Short but significant. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (12/17/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    It brings the uncertainty of life..............fantastic and.resembles Matsuo Basho's haiku.
    The three lines tell us a very long journey! (Report) Reply

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