For My Love Poem by Sahar Sahar

How long it took, from ripen to fall, when i seeded a stare in your eyes, , . kissing the sky, while riding the clouds, a desire rained on my eyelashes. i persist like a hope, in an absolute pause, even a smoke bitter to eyes, i am still with love, just waiting, to listen from you, , that you love me too. a master piece poem.. so short and so explanatory.. deep, romatic, realistic, hypothetical way of expression.. facts touching style...and a greta question..about some one..your seeding love in his eyes..may ripe your mature love and life if the trust has developed.. loved this poem..

am still with love, just waiting, to listen from you, , that you love me too.......................... life is on high hope as to walk on tight rope some time on high some times on slope Sahar never stop never stop never stop you may have to wait but it won't be late it won't be luck or fate it is simple blank slate incribe on it let light dimly lit feel warmth and not the heat fragrance may be very sweet go and pray have little say find the the way look at the shining ray..... lovely poem.... i loved it...perfect...10

i persist like a hope, in an absolute pause, Brilliant description of hope and pause in your poem. Thats what love does to one's self; ' hope and despair in my heart' is my poem to express similar feelings.

you are love incarnate............ lovely write...........................................

when i seeded a stare in your eyes, , . kissing the sky, while riding the clouds, a desire rained on my eyelashes................. dream still riffles by last dreg of dream heart yet engrosses upon raving eyes, amazing expression of love of longing, wrought ingenious by imagery, the diction is yet of uniquegenre