Changing Lanes Poem by Sahar Sahar

Changing Lanes

Rating: 4.2


changing lanes,
Just with one click,
One trick,
one slip,
and addicted mind,
Bounced by wind,
a coming dream,
upstream,
like a cutting beam,
flight overnight,
under deceit,
black and white,
wrong or right,
everything right,
may i know,
when our neurons, sleep?
too deep,
before p.c,
cyber-love,
all and above,
can it be true?
when everything,
and every lane,
changes,
Just by one click,
and one slip.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Rich with a rabid reality that is refreshing. Well done my friend!

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Saadat Tahir 11 October 2009

hi sahar...u go clicketey click... masterly short lines very well done... well if the clicking finger is yours....torment averted..! ! a subjest close to my heart.... cheers and ten

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Rafique Farooqi 01 October 2009

A sharp edged and fast write.........

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Afzal Shauq 30 September 2009

changing lanes, Just with one click, One trick, one slip, and addicted mind, Bounced by wind, a coming dream, upstream, like a cutting beam, flight overnight, under deceit, black and white, perfect.. really you collected very sweet words and the composition is remarkable too.. meaningful way of writing and you know how to knock the doors of heart with your sweet poetry like you did here.. best of luck 10/10

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Joseph Poewhit 30 September 2009

Life in the fast lane

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