Forget Poem by hannah baquiran

Forget

Rating: 4.7


Sometimes it's hard to forget a person,
especially the one close to my heart.
At first it is hard to move on,
but someday I will forget.

All those times I am with you,
I tried my best to let you feel
that you are important to me.
Even then, you choose to forget.

So pain strikes my heart,
when your have rejected me.
I am just a simple friend of yours,
whom you will soon leave and forget.

But then I now realized
that even how I tried to forget you,
yet I can not erase the memories...
that we have shared together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Viruvelil 12 September 2008

No one forget about feelings of love to some on you loved But you will go on and have more love and loss of love Mind thus become a pile of memories of old lost love and you keep on licking the wounds till the moment of death

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Marvin Brato 12 September 2008

Sometimes it's hard to forget a person, especially the one close to my heart. At first it is hard to move on, but someday I will forget. All those times I am with you, I tried my best to let you feel that you are important to me. Even then, you choose to forget. So pain strikes my heart, when your have rejected me. I am just a simple friend of yours, whom you will soon leave and forget. But then I now realized that even how I tried to forget you, yet I can not erase the memories... that we have shared together. Note: Your composition is good; you expressed it with passion. You have the talent so keep on writing: Practice makes perfect, right? Just do not be redundant, use synonyms without losing focus on your theme, ok?

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