Forgotten Poem by Asif Baloch

Forgotten



My stars are vanished
since dark clouds has rised
my life blew away like smoke
without trace, in the sky

I reached like a blind
to grab hand of love
thorns and stones
been gifted for my entire life

Now I don't know, where I'm going
where I am, dream like feelings
are stuck in my frame

standing in the mist
of gloomy hopes
searching for those words
which did went lost
crying like a child
with no tears to shed
I have become that book
which is unable to read
stumbling and roaming
like slumdog cloud
weeping for those lost ones
with no rain to drop
screaming and crying
with no sound to hear
I have turned into that leprechuan
to whom everyone do fear
love is fake or do I have become fake
I see my appereance in mirror with full of hate

just falling thoughts has become
my companion since lonesome past
my present is filled with
black and darkened nights
still hope lurks for my future, that
I might see a glimpse of sunlight

no reason to live a life at full, asif
is what I had left
I have been forgotten, or
been forgot what I could get

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 26 December 2009

poignant write, soul-stirring!

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

still hope lurks for my future, that I might see a glimpse of sunlight Rachel Ann Butler

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Akram Saqib 10 October 2009

pessimistic thoughts deftly woven in words

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Joseph Poewhit 08 October 2009

Look at the other side of the coin - for good

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Seema Chowdhury 08 October 2009

hi Asif, once aqgain it is a beautiful poem but its filled with lots of pain. don't give up. just open your heart and look around and see how beautiful life is. see some of my new poems Dwell in my soul pg1 Watch the magic happen pg3

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