Captain Cur

Rookie - 415 Points (England)

Fortuitous Love, Love Poems - Poem by Captain Cur

Truth and love, naked beauty in their arms,
taming man defeated by their charms.
On plush meadows loves youthful urges play,
the river calm, smooth daylight waning dusk,
circling slowly above coarse birds of prey
poised to kill sweet innocence with their lust.
True love discerns the vultures and the crows
steadfast it bears, unveils a tender pride,
outward it beams and passionately flows
supplanting the fragility of lies.
Fettered truths, past deceits their unkind guard,
fortuitous love now sounds escape's alarm.


Comments about Fortuitous Love, Love Poems by Captain Cur

  • Rookie - 360 Points David Wood (5/4/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Another brilliant poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 827 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/29/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    'True love discerns the vultures and the crows' apt use of metaphors to represent the idea of love. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (4/27/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    Truths are sometimes fettered by past deceits. This poem could have a slightly different meaning for everyone and that's what makes poems like this so fascinating. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,901 Points Ken E Hall (4/26/2013 5:41:00 PM)

    BOUNTIFUL LOVE comes across a winner in this clever poem...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (4/26/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    my love to the truth and this perfect work. full of love and emotion captain. love is the source of every goodness.
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 724 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/26/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    Fortuitous Love if it continues as true love then it's OK! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 25, 2013


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