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Caleb Gonzales

Rookie - 9 Points (05/13/1992-05/13/2092 / Bakersfield California)

Free minds


Free minds are closed minds
In a different perspective
Strangers or brothers
Yours or mine
Free minds
Strange minds in a strange world
With a twisted reality
Reminding us, of the dark days
Flashes of our old ways
The journey for a brighter Vision Hoping for a brighter journey
When your journey has all but ended... Close your mind and free your soul

Submitted: Sunday, May 04, 2014

Topic of this poem: mind


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  • Freshman - 1,001 Points Leah Ayliffe (7/8/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    Fantastic! I love this one! Reminds me a little of The Doors
    Great choice of words:
    Free minds
    Strange minds in a strange world
    With a twisted reality
    Reminding us, of the dark days
    Flashes of our old ways
    Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 913 Points Susan Lacovara (5/5/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    I have found the best way to deal with closed minds is to practice tolerance...possibly change their minds, through a peaceful positivity....wishful thinking, but I will continue to keep an open mind. Thanks for your thought provoking write. As always, PEACE. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Brian Jani (5/4/2014 4:20:00 AM)

    Free minds, what a fitting title for such a good poem.please checkout my poems caleb (Report) Reply

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