Fresh Energy Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fresh Energy

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Why not pray sun set?
Think of fresh energy to get
Relaxation over activities of hectic day
To think of sun rise very next day

Yes it is quest for good life
The question of faith for strife
It is strong resolve to face the challenge
Love to work hard and manage

As sun moves around globe
What scope is left for any probe?
It is time to relax and assess
Think over days gain and loss

It is recognition open fact
That needs reaction with positive act
Work for whole of the day
And relax when night offers dark sway

Go and surrender with peace of mind
The divine object has provided kind relief
It needs consolation for inner voice
Good attempt for bright future promise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Why not pray sun set? Think of fresh energy to get

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

pretty good kelly lisa dale2 hours ago i liked it Comment +1

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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Well done in this poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno muchas gracias

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome elaine taub 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

nice work! Poetry IsLife2 hours ago a few grammar errors, but good start!

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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