Friends Poem by DIKELEDI CONSTANCE

Friends

Rating: 5.0


Me and you are friends,
you laugh, i laugh
you smile, i smile
you jump of the bridge....... i miss u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nengovhela Murendeni 12 June 2009

thank GOD you also jumped the bridge to the world of poets. Next time add more verses and it will be greet. I give you a vote.

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Kurt Behle 12 June 2009

you jump of the bridge....... i miss u Mmm.... Not that bad esp. for starters well The msg of the content is wonderful and is what matters most. I felt it in 4 line and be pleased i'll always remember it, it's worth it! Well done DK u did it. 10+ Push the lines next time. B. Kurt

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