Richard Blay

Rookie - 96 Points (September / Prestea)

Friends


Friends, false friends are like shadows
Remaining with you only when the sun shines
Indeed a friend is when in need
Ever wondered why? I'll tell you
None likes dark days, so those who stays
Dare I say, are friends indeed!
So careful how friends you choose

This is a simple acrostic poem.
Date: 07/03/2014

Submitted: Tuesday, March 25, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Topic of this poem: friendship


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is dedicated to whoever has been
let down by a 'friend'. Don't be insensate in
choosing a friend next time.

Comments about this poem (Friends by Richard Blay )

  • Gold Star - 20,980 Points Chinedu Dike (2/4/2015 6:13:00 AM)

    A lovely piece of poetry penned with insight. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A good friend is almost the equal of a good and happy family. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Shania K. Younce (3/30/2014 5:14:00 PM)

    A well written poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,464 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/29/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    A good poem, I am reminded of a poem that I read in my college, I forgot the poet's name but its heading was True Friend as far as I remember: -
    If thy sorrow,
    He will weep.
    If thou awake,
    He cannot sleep.

    These are certain signs to know,
    Faithful friend from a flattering foe. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,101 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/25/2014 12:38:00 PM)

    very beautiful. I like it. (Report) Reply

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