Gap Between Life And Death Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Gap Between Life And Death

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</>Standing in shallow water when it is low tide
Experience one can get there of a life time,
When the receding water after a high tide
Washes away sand from beneath your feet.

The surfs hit you hard if to them you stop
While receding they push you off balance,
Pulling you all the while inside the ocean
Narrowing, thus, your life and deaths gap.

Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Experience on life is well expressed, thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Off balance! Nice work.

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Ramesh Rai 13 September 2015

Experience between life and death is unforgettable. At such moment anyone can forget the sanctity of life. Thanks so much Sir for sharing. Kind regards.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 November 2011

there is great depth in this poem. commendable. shan

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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