Generally Speaking Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Generally Speaking

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The guns fall silent and the dead
lie quietly they’ve played their part.
The night hour’s pass heavy with dread
at first light the big guns will start.

The sound of the artillery
will fill the silent skies again.
Eroding further bravery
of the war weary fighting men.

The brave young men on either side
are doomed to die face down in mud.
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide.
Their dug outs do but little good.

A shell burst may not kill just maim
The lucky ones are those who die,
they are the winners in this game
when thick and fast the bullets fly.

Opposing sides move to and fro
to capture trenches they’ve just left.
For no good reason that they know
obeying orders quite bereft

of any sign of sanity.
The generals are safe behind the lines
Unlike the vast majority
who fight to fulfil their designs.

Lions by donkeys badly led
Young men by the thousand died.
A foreign field their final bed
because good sense was not applied.

In Flanders fields the poppies grow.
The soil enriched by their hearts blood
What have we learnt we did not know?
Nobody won Nobody could.

There are no winners none at all
except perhaps the carrion crows
They dine well when the soldiers fall
as mighty nations come to blows.

Survivors return home broken men
with small support and little praise.
Until they’re needed once again
when countries their new armies raise.

Another war to end all wars.
We do not learn from history
For men can always find a cause.
Why this should be a mystery.

18-Feb-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 19 February 2008

Well written. I wish we could convey with words the terrible tragedy of this war and every war. I truly wish that we would see the end of war period. I have read extensively about WWI and still cannot 'comprehend' (don't know what word to use) how many thousands died from all the countries involved and the senseless way in which they were killing each other. Survivors return home broken men (So many never came back.) Young men by the thousand died. A foreign field their final bed In Flanders fields the poppies grow. The soil enriched by their hearts blood (flooded with blood) What have we learnt we did not know? (Yes, what have we learned?) Nobody won Nobody could. There are no winners none at all except perhaps the carrion crows They dine well when the soldiers fall as mighty nations come to blows. Your words are so true. I hope the lesson is learned some day.

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