Arzu-e-sahar mein kiya karti
zindagi ko basar mein kiya karti
ashk behnay mein ik tabaahi thi
rokti na agar to kiya karti
mujh ko urrnay ka shoq tha hi nhi
baadalon per safar mein kiya karti
shehr veeraan, manzilen ma'adoom
aur tanha dagar- mein kiya karti
essi cheezon ki uss ko qadr na thi
apnay dil ko nazar mein kiya karti
saray shikway, gilay sbhi such thay
maanti na agar to kiya karti
Dil ki baazi mein haar behtar thi
phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti
baadalon per safar - felt like floating in the clouds. Nice ghazal. Thank you.
I cannot choose one particular pair of lines to be the best one. Each line has it's own beauty. A perfect ghazal.
each word is like pearl embedded with magnifiscent shinning. each line is marvellous confessing the truth. just witnessing last one - in the game of love the winner has to loose one's heart. beautiful ghazal.10 +++
mujh ko urrnay ka shoq tha hi nhi baadalon per safar mein kiya karti.. waah, ...kia sochney ka nadazz hai.....kahan sey ye soch aati hai..
Wah Wah Kya baat hai..... Dil ki baazi mein haar behtar thi phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti
Wonderful....Phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti...Beautiful ghazal... Plus...10
A lovely ghazal! ! ! Good rhythm throughout the poem thus making it enjoyable. mujh ko urrnay ka shoq tha hi nhi baadalon per safar mein kiya karti arresting lines! ! ! The ending is fabulous! ! ! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dil ki baazi mein haar behtar thi/phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti - - - - - -excellent verse.I think these are the keynote of the poem.