Given hope-
like brightly wrapped
ribbons on boxes
holding unknown
surprises.
Sharing love-
like smiles spreading
from faces of strangers
opening secrets
unshared.
Stealing kisses-
behind walls erected
by battered minds
withdrawn.
Revealing all-
in one simple sentence
love once hidden
becomes openly
surrendered.
8/5/08
Lovely poem. Love is a gift, especially from those who have 'walls erected by battered minds'. Great imagery and sentiment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This piece deserves far more attention and positive comments that it has recieved so far. In fact, ALL your work does. You are a genuinely gifted person, Vi, and I am so glad that I can share in the enjoyment of your work.