So hard - this life-
times test
even the strongest heart,
deepening scars
our fathers laid.
Impressionable eyes
seek knowledge in lies,
understanding nothing
while hearing all.
Searching our youth
we see a world of fear,
step unseen
into danger's arms.
Knowing ourselves
comes with a price -
we pay as we go
for a chance at life.
For what can we give,
that appeases our soul,
except control
and our hearts desire.
Scared of tomorrow
we step into age
with knowledge procured
in dangerous ways,
with lessons learnt
from earlier days.
2/4/08
Great piece.It merits 12, but alas I can only give 10 regards Tom
Thank you for this, it has helped me straighten out alot of what ive been thinking. A wonderful poem. Thank you.
I identify with this great poem on life as it is thrown at us Viola! thanks for sharing my heartfelt concern, I am sure This Life will make a big impression on whoever reads it. Smiling anyway! Tai
Remarkable thoughts, quite a definition of what life is made of! Thanks for sharing, a 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As we stride down lifes road, we learn by experience, which sometimes enables us to deal with what we find around the next bend. Tango.