There was a time
when all I ever wanted
was to sink into you,
devour your tender mouth,
taste your soul.
Now?
I just want to kiss you.
30/1/09
Deep expressionate words you have used Viola...liking this...10+++...thanks...Fi
left gasping; guessing what wind blew my senses away? ? ? awesome
Once we taste soul Viola we can never forget it - - this is a brilliant little verse - - it says such a lot........ thanks and a big 10 for it..... with a hug....Fay...xx
lol totally awesome reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.
lol totally awesome reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.
A brilliant short piece where every word works for you. I love the unique approach you bring to poetry. Steve
Just wanted to come back and reaffirm my love for this piece aroha, r
It looks as if you need some magic love potion to improve your appetite...an imaginative write...original and unique...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good write a lot said in few words 10+