Viola Grey

Rookie - 0 Points (Feb '73 / NZ)

A Visit From The Past - Poem by Viola Grey

There was a time
when all I ever wanted
was to sink into you,
devour your tender mouth,
taste your soul.
Now?
I just want to kiss you.

30/1/09


Comments about A Visit From The Past by Viola Grey

  • Rookie David Sabo (12/27/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    lol totally awesome
    reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie David Sabo (12/27/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    lol totally awesome
    reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephen Stirk (4/14/2009 3:14:00 PM)

    A brilliant short piece where every word works for you. I love the unique approach you bring to poetry.
    Steve (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points _____________________________________ - (2/14/2009 3:47:00 AM)

    Just wanted to come back and reaffirm my love for this piece

    aroha, r (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (2/13/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    It looks as if you need some magic love potion to improve your appetite...an imaginative write...original and unique...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Wells (2/9/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    Hey Vi! Where ya bin? ? ?
    Nice to have you back And as steamy as ever! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (2/9/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    How gorgeous is this! Love it! You are so honest with your work, and there are no hidden agendas in this one that I can see. A different kind of love, much easier and more lovely for you. Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (2/9/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    What a lovely way of expression, in such a few short verses ive never wanted me lip nibbled so much, thats why we love your work, you can almost taste the words.10

    Stacks of dirty dishes

    Jon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (2/8/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    this made me think and then write good job.... Love it. our need for something always seems to grow.
    Becca (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Existential Despair (2/6/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    Very short and precise conveying the full meaning in so little words is no easy feat.very nice! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Fay Slimm (2/2/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    Once we taste soul Viola we can never forget it - - this is a brilliant little verse - - it says such a lot........ thanks and a big 10 for it..... with a hug....Fay...xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points _____________________________________ - (2/1/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    left gasping; guessing what wind blew my senses away? ? ? awesome (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (1/31/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    Deep expressionate words you have used Viola...liking this...10+++...thanks...Fi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Laurie Hill (1/31/2009 5:49:00 PM)

    Is it age, complacency or contentment? : 0) ........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LOVEFOOL Aka (1/31/2009 5:43:00 PM)

    good write a lot said in few words 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (1/31/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    Not so greedy now then, this is actually a very deep piece, well worked.10++
    regards Tom (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 31, 2009



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