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A visit from the past

There was a time
when all I ever wanted
was to sink into you,
devour your tender mouth,
taste your soul.
Now?
I just want to kiss you.

30/1/09

Submitted: Saturday, January 31, 2009


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  • David Sabo (12/27/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    lol totally awesome
    reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.

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  • David Sabo (12/27/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    lol totally awesome
    reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.

  • Stephen Stirk (4/14/2009 3:14:00 PM)

    A brilliant short piece where every word works for you. I love the unique approach you bring to poetry.
    Steve

  • _____________________________________ - (2/14/2009 3:47:00 AM)

    Just wanted to come back and reaffirm my love for this piece

    aroha, r

  • Kesav Easwaran (2/13/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    It looks as if you need some magic love potion to improve your appetite...an imaginative write...original and unique...10

  • Kevin Wells (2/9/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    Hey Vi! Where ya bin? ? ?
    Nice to have you back And as steamy as ever!

  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (2/9/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    How gorgeous is this! Love it! You are so honest with your work, and there are no hidden agendas in this one that I can see. A different kind of love, much easier and more lovely for you. Karin Anderson

  • ~ Jon London ~ (2/9/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    What a lovely way of expression, in such a few short verses ive never wanted me lip nibbled so much, thats why we love your work, you can almost taste the words.10

    Stacks of dirty dishes

    Jon

  • *Trusting You* (2/8/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    this made me think and then write good job.... Love it. our need for something always seems to grow.
    Becca

  • Existential Despair (2/6/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    Very short and precise conveying the full meaning in so little words is no easy feat.very nice! ! !

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