Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 749 Points (Washington State)

((( Gift))) - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

You were like the gift of Spring--
A bouquet of Red Roses and Babys Breath...
You rescued me from an empty sea...
Saving me from a loveless death.
Oh the regrets i held so deep--
Fathomless and nearly beyond repair...
But you were like the gift of Spring--
Tell you- there were blossoms everywhere.
You were a virtual meadow of forget-me-nots...
Altering my depths with loving care...
Becoming an ocean of scintilating waves of rapture...
A verdent garden of bloom scented oceanic air.
Yes -you were like the gift of Spring--
A garden-a bloom-a calm and fulfilled sea...
You were my miracle i oft' prayed for...
Binding us together for eternity.

The Essence
June 14,2010

Dedicated to: My husband.


Comments about ((( Gift))) by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Rookie - 329 Points marvin brato (1/9/2014 12:41:00 PM)

    Binding us for eternity....is true love! (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (8/10/2013 6:39:00 PM)

    Written very nice and full of passionate words. Yes she is like a
    gift of spring. So full of freshness and of great color and beauty.
    just like fresh picked flowers. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 14, 2010



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