The habits to earn
Benefits from others
Evoke self-centeredness
And convert people
Into ignorant sculptures
With their recieving ends
Devoid of pleasures of life.
But, if unconditionally
One adopts
The ability to give,
Support and facilitate others
Without expecting rewards
Is bestowed with
Inner contentment.
3/17/2009
The ability to give without expecting any reward is a lesson for all - 10
a good subject for PH poets..well done...10+++ But, if unconditionally One adopts The ability to give, Support and facilitate others Without expecting rewards Is bestowed with Inner contentment.
System are not what documents say.... They are habits of people, which they practice.... Have good habits and give good system to new generation....!
Message with guidance for a better life - wonderful. Unfortunately there will always be takers....thank G-D for the givers we have.Well written- Regards Cindy
what a great way to put a huge canvas through so few words..very very nice poem simple yet touching and... almost imposes self reflection
I don't know whether this is a good thing or a bad one but this poem kinda sounds essayish; D But I agree with your way of thinking though, giving is definitely something which should be enjoyed and not sulked over ;)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice flow of thoughts Surayya, well done. Best, Jerry