hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Give Freedom - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Give freedom to women
As respect is given by all religions
The almighty has give clear directives
Do not abuse any one and be selective

Crime still takes place
Despite strict rules to chase
No one can stop human desires
One needs to understand and admire

Honor your womenfolk
As they can not freely walk
Present ideas before male domination
That may strangulate the relation

Respect the wishes of almighty
That has shown so much mercy
Respect the child from birth
Male or female till the death

Woman is your mother
And loved one as sister
You are custodian and protector
Be little considerate savior


Comments about Give Freedom by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2014 10:26:00 PM)

    Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Wonderful poem..6 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    Equality

    Brea Reeve4 minutes ago
    Lovely, some words could be switched up but beside that its a beautiful message and poem thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/20/2014 8:34:00 PM)

    Give freedom to women
    As respect is given by all religions (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 20, 2014



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