Gladly Disclose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Gladly Disclose

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I have found her
From priceless treasure
To be called my only possession
I am seized with so much of obsession

She is always there
To beat my heart here
I can hear her say
"This is only way"

Fire gives me some relief
But she is brief
Not speaking at length
I hold some times my breathe

She never gives in
Any clue to feel
I go against my will
And sail with her still

I shall not term it hopeless
She is my smiling face
I find several lines
When she speaks off line

My hand goes up
To save him from worldly trap
I always pray her well being
As she my queen and I as her king

I expect small prince in her belly
That sign is given already
I shall wait for good news
When you may gladly disclose

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Gladly disclose I have found her From priceless treasure To be called my only possession I am seized with so much of obsession

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Nice Tim Zimmerman4 minutes ago The poem is well writen

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Love Story Tawana ArringtonLess than a minute ago This Poem Is Amazing,

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I especially like the 4th stanza...it became more clear on the 2nd read... 28 Jun by T Owen Stark to Gladly disclose

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awesome Warner Baxter13 minutes ago congratulations

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Nicely done John RobertsLess than a minute ago Well written

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good Gloria Nichols4 minutes ago Good job

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Very nice babyCrawDaddy2 minutes ago It tells a very nice story. I didn't catch on to that story until the end, but once I figured it out, it was very nice! Keep up the good work!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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