God And The Nature, A Story Poem Poem by Charlotte Riley

God And The Nature, A Story Poem

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God lay in Heaven
And looked at the world,
With peace and happiness today,
No one fighting or being bad,
They were all in Hell.

A day passed by,
Then He saw a fly,
And the world began to soak,
How miserable they look,
I wonder how they would they react without the rain.

The sun shone on the world alone,
Prayers filled the air for rain to fill the sky,
God was glad to hear what they said,
And made them a pie and rain.
God was glad again.

Charlotte Riley (9)
Middleton Parish Church Primary School
This was a Young Writers poetry competiton I took part in at primary school

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 22 December 2009

This is a marvelous piece.You are a real talent! ..I particularly love your last lines. Love the flow of your words. Keep on penning, my dear. Hugs, Meggie

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