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* God Omni - 5 - Poem by JOE POEWHIT

In our domain universe, within GODS
spiritual universe. We vessels encompass
within us a soul. Like a blank CD, we live
life, inscribing upon our souls all of our
life. GOD, gave man free will of heart and
volition. So, man sojourns his years upon
earth. Collecting deeds upon one's soul.

GOD, created GOOD & EVIL upon earth.
Like a fullers fire, refining the slag from the
gold.Our soul, through our volition, gathers
slag [evil] or gold [good]. This soul on judgment
day will be judged by GOD. The good GOD
will retain and the evil banished.

5/20/09 POEWHIT


Comments about * God Omni - 5 by JOE POEWHIT

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/4/2010 5:59:00 AM)

    This is an absolute truth! God vindicates those He loves. His righteousness of truth prevails. Goats and sheep, evil and good, will be divided. A thoughtful poem; D (Report) Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (8/28/2009 1:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful abstract, interpretive poem. Indeed, by separating the goodness from the badness we can reach the Heaven...................10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (8/24/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    '...The good GOD
    will retain and the evil banished.'

    Packets of hope!
    Bonanza of hope! !
    dr. sakti (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/15/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    'This soul on judgment
    day will be judged by GOD. The good GOD
    will retain and the evil banished'

    great lines from a great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Inner Whispers (5/31/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    True, the good Lord is the infinite OMNI...I like your writings! (Report) Reply

  • Michael Tunduli (5/30/2009 7:05:00 PM)

    Very true truths expressed.And I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (5/29/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    There is always a strong message in your work, Truly divine, Joe, Its lovely.10 (Report) Reply

  • Lady Grace (5/29/2009 5:20:00 AM)

    GOD saves HIS every followers.GOD is the creator of heaven and earth..GOD is the author of love.HE let no evil destroys us if we always have HIM in our hearts..grace (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S Sathyanarayana M V S (5/20/2009 11:12:00 AM)

    Very true. Very defining.................. (Report) Reply

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (5/20/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    lovely write...good evil all in place (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 20, 2009

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