(golden Rule Applies To The Heart) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(golden Rule Applies To The Heart)

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Knowing love ones suffer,
also breaks our heart deeper.
At the time when we determine,
that we are the cause of their pain.

Knowing sweethearts cry,
also hurt our egos that try
to console furtive sorrows,
must not wait for tomorrows.

Knowing we are not quite perfect,
committing mistakes is imperfect.
The only way we can make for amend,
Apply the Golden Rule for hearts to mend.

Note (G.R. = Do not do to others what you do not want others do to you!)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 23 September 2008

true so true a very beautiful write indeed....thanks 10

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Fay Slimm 16 September 2008

I totally agree with that golden rule Marvin, and you brought it out so well. Thank you.

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Blue Eyes 14 September 2008

i love it.and i love the last tip its the most important part of the poem.

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Tarun Sharma 14 September 2008

very nice feelings written in verses! rgds

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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