Gone For A Toss! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Gone For A Toss! !

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Gone for a toss Yup,
it has gone
Nobody knows which way it will fall
Who tossed it and for whom?
A million dollar question,
Flying up like a balloon
Certainly life, blames fate
And fate curses, death
In-between we are
Silently waiting for the fall....

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 01 September 2018

A deep and well considered piece, my friend.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2018

Thanks my friend....

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Naila Rais 01 September 2018

Thnx for sharing..... A good piece.. You may like to read my poems too.... Naila

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2018

Thanks Naila....

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

Excellent Poem in the form of Ghazal.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 September 2018

Nobody knows and nobody will ever know, so believe whatever uou like.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2018

A deep philosophical write on life. Beautifully conceived. Wisdom all the way.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2018

A beautiful philosophical poem nicely executed. Thank u dear Asim for sharing amazingly.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2018

A thought provoking poem. Very well conveyed. Yes, sometimes we blame fate when something happens in our life.10+++

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Thanks Rose for your encouraging comments

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