Hira Akhtar

Rookie - 68 Points (19-3-1998 / Gujrat)

Good Habits - Poem by Hira Akhtar

Get up early in the morning
For being fit and healthy its a warning

Saying all the prayers is the way
To get mental and spirtual refreshment all the day

Clean your hands and clean your mouth
Germs'll be killed there is no doubt

Eat healthy and eat slowly
Stomache'll never get out of order, can say it surely

Study at study time and play at play time
This will make your future shine

Never be loud and obey your elders
Will get success in life this service who renders

Love your youngers and give them care
Otherwise from you they will scare

Keeping the company of good people
Will make your personality graceful

Say 'Good night' and go to bed early
So that you may get up to recite Quran Holy

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I want to give this message to children........

Comments about Good Habits by Hira Akhtar

  • Rookie - 68 Points Hira Akhtar (4/3/2014 1:10:00 AM)

    thanks sir for being kind :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,105 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/1/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    A good poem, capable of inclusion in primary school syllabus. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Usman Arshad (12/29/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Also mom instructions on morning walk (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Usman Arshad (12/29/2013 9:57:00 AM)

    Apply good habbits on yourself like early to rise and always keep smiling (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,724 Points Bri Edwards (8/20/2013 8:54:00 PM)

    Stomache'll never get out of order, can say it surely..... Stomach'll......

    you have some good ideas for leading a good life. proofread (maybe more than once) to avoid silly mistakes like: gget and copmany //////////////get///////company. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/1/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    It expresses your mature thoughts at immature age but wisdom is nothing to do with age, well-done Hira the last verse is great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013

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