Hira Akhtar

Rookie - 8 Points (19-3-1998 / Gujrat)

I Miss You Mom


I miss you mom whenever I am
at school or at my homework see

I miss your hugs and kisses
that you used to give me

I miss your sweet and
caring voice calling me

I miss those presents on my
birthday that you used to give me

I miss your beautiful face
making smile looking at me

I miss your loveable anger
that had an advice for me

I miss whenever i got prizes
and your happiness for me

I miss the breakfast that you
used to prepare for me

I miss whenever i was late
from school and your worry for me

I miss you mom whenever I am
at school or at my homework see

Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013

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i really really do miss her...: (

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  • Rookie - 42 Points Meena Mustafa (3/1/2014 11:43:00 PM)

    None can take the place of a mother.... who's love is unconditional. I can feel your pain. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,196 Points Dinesh Nair (1/19/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    I miss your loveable anger
    that had an advice for me...

    How beautiful it is that her anger is loveable!

    I miss whenever i was late
    from school and your worry for me

    That care is quite motherly....

    A fine poem from a duteous daughter brought up on the right track.. A fine poem dear Hira. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,044 Points Bri Edwards (8/20/2013 8:56:00 PM)

    Hira, it is a nice tribute to the memory of your mom. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/25/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    It's an elegy in memory of mother whose love is boundless and so are her memories, very emotional and written in flowing couplets so suit the theme-unending love for mother. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 331 Points Saadat Tahir (4/24/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    lovely
    an ode and painful penning to a lost mother
    nicely done...more in message pl (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 331 Points Manoorsa Jan (4/22/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    Hira you are as my daughter Maria Saleem. Allah may give u Patience and success in Life...Aameen (Report) Reply

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