Pushing the shroud of darkness
From Night’s tenebrous sepulcher
A new day emerges
Like a babe smiling through tears
I hear it knocking at my door
I don’t know if it brings delight
Or despondency in its wake
However I shall greet it
With a ‘Good Morning’!
To me it is like the commentary of a mega event having the backing of certain smaller events shrouded in uncertainty. The emergence of a dawn and the birth of a new day was never so radiant: A new day emerges / Like a babe smiling through tears
Very fantastic write. Depicted with briliant phraseology. Let the morning brings you delight instead of despondency......10
Morning greets us every day, sometimes it is not a welcome sight, but most times it is a symbol of joy and a feeling of anything is possible! Superb write!
every new day is a Hope given by God for making it extra special. A very Good Morning and Good Day to you Mam
Verily, a positive attitude and optimistic approach towards life......10
Piercing the gloom of night a new dawn emerges like a 'babe smiling through tears'; though uncertain it is welcome.Very well written, Valsa.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good Morning Ma'am! That is spirit after two despondent Senryus! A 10 for the tenebrous sepulcher alone.