Good Morning Super Poet Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Good Morning Super Poet

Rating: 3.8


Nature has started singing,
As early morning is ringing.
Swinging elephant is calling
Near hill top snow is stalling.

Crawling leaves in new trees,
Morning provokes far breeze.
Please feel this fragrance far,
Driving in alert this lovely car.

You create and manage well,
In sweet voice always you tell.
Dwelling in far path this soul,
Ever we do try to achieve goal.

You write eternity is amazing,
By your laws time is dancing.
Thread of love has tied nature,
Interesting is your legislature.

Oh Super Poet, good morning
In true hearts we are adoring.
As early morning is ringing
Nature has started singing.

© Bhargabi Dei Mahakul, August 29,2015. All rights reserved.

Thursday, March 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: morning,nature,spiritual,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hearing Nature's song at early morning mind sings to wish good morning to Super Father, who is Super poet of this creation. This poem is written at holy moment on awakening of first hour offering wishes to God, beloved father of heaven and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2017

It is a beautiful spiritual poem with marvellous depiction. Thanks for sharing such an aubade....10

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Akhtar Jawad 05 July 2018

Oh Super Poet, good morning In true hearts we are adoring. As early morning is ringing Nature has started singing. Welcoming a dawn is common in all the religions. A lovely poem that catches the hearts.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 April 2018

TWO: two of the lines from your poem I want to cite here, loveliest words: By your laws time is dancing..Thread of love has tied nature, Fantastic must that be! I love the notes too. Thank you for sharing your gorgeous poem with us. A 10 for the voting.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 April 2018

ONE: The excellent atmosphere you were in was the main inspiring motive, I reckon. This poem gives me the hiighest feel of glee. I was telling myself that I am missing you, please let your quill be filled again and create some new poems, such a great pity if talents will not be used.I have enjoyed very much your impressive poem,

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Chuy Amante 24 September 2017

I loved your note as much as your poem Giving that first thought to God, nice practice

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2017

Adoring! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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