God You Bestow Peace Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

God You Bestow Peace

Rating: 4.5


We never urge you have given us right,
By mercy everyday you bestow us light.
You are father we are children we know,
Sunshine touches and in love melts snow.

We need no war, ever peace we do need,
Vices go far; values come in life's deed.
You feed us sweet fruits through nature,
For us you have so large love legislature.

You bestow wisdom we leave away greed,
Blessing us you bestow eternal bliss seed.
You bestow ever peace degree we agree,
Freedom of action we feel we are sure free.

Searching for peace ever many of us think,
Oh God, dear father we have eternal link.
Ink flows down from pen to write for you,
With zeal we feel peace, life has nice view.

For peace in eternal path we are in a flow,
Showing us right path in eternity you glow.
Igniting night you give us dazzling bright,
Peace comes up to us through mercy light.

Copyright © Bhargabi Dei Mahakul,02 May 2017. All rights reserved.

God You Bestow Peace
Tuesday, May 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god,peace,spiritual
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 May 2017

A good prayer indeed. Thanks

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 May 2017

Absolutely, PEACE He bestowed. My concise response this time, but my long response from previous time had gone. I dunno why, but that is a fact and I reported PH. No answer yet, but it will come, that answer, am sure. Mrs. Bhargabi you always are a very diligent poetess AND a very gifted. Thank you that you are publishing poems here on PH. This is amazing outings from a poetess most kindest. A 10 for your poetry, dear. His Blessings in abundance be upon thee.

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Michael Walker 01 August 2017

You put it so well that we need peace not war. Men work towards peace between countries; others think that God gives us peace. This poem makes me think hard.

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Chuy Amante 24 September 2017

Such warm thoughts from a pure heart thanks, Namascar

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 November 2018

A very sunny message to God hope you will be listened to Happy Divali ma'am

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 July 2018

I have come again to read this so most beautiful tribute to God. This poem is created only because you are God' s Child so mild. The words altogether in this poem, show us as the readers that your life is based upon God's Law and His Endless Love. I have enjoyed very much to read this gem again, this Devotional masterly crafted. You are busy with other things, I reckon, but please do create more poems for PH. Thank you so much, gratefully yours, Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 June 2018

beautiful picture along with lovely poetry ma'am

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 June 2018

very beautiful picture and of course befitting poetry great words ma'am

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Akhtar Jawad 01 November 2017

Peace comes up to us through mercy light. Great thoughts, a poem with an universal message of peace.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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