Adegbite Adeyinka

Rookie - 26 Points (14-05-1991)

Goodnight's Prayer - Poem by Adegbite Adeyinka

Guard the pane of my heart
Let not foes steal the peace;
Paint my dream a solemn art
All I ask of you is this
Make me ride on chariot dream
Love for others, in me, grow;
And when I wake in morning's gleam
Give me strength, my boat, to row


Comments about Goodnight's Prayer by Adegbite Adeyinka

  • Gold Star - 7,657 Points Bri Edwards (9/27/2013 11:31:00 AM)

    on the strength of the rhyming and ideas, i score it a good...almost very good. peace/this isn't quite right but it is close enough. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,589 Points Ramesh Rai (9/19/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    Make me ride on chariot dream
    Love for others, in me, grow;
    And when I wake in morning's gleam
    Give me strength, my boat, to row
    a beautiful thought. great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Luna Tsuki (8/16/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    great poem, so much hope and melancholy to be felt while reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 207 Points Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (7/16/2013 1:40:00 PM)

    Love for others, in me, grow;
    Give me strength, my boat, to row
    the poem is totally impressing, nevertheless, here are my best lines. They are poetically syntated and accurately invased. It's sure, you are a good poem reader... It ooze from your works (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 12, 2013


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