Treasure Island

maria sudibyo

(280883 / parist van java)

Greatest Listening Act


I want to say it straight and blunt
And I don’t need to add any reason
Because it sounds like self defense
And only satisfying your hidden accusing

Every time of our meeting
Is like my torturing machine
You always repeat the same thing
I feel my patience is going thin

What if I’m saying “no”
What if I’m just walking away
Do you accept rejection
Or turn you into a revenge

How much longer I could take
How long my smile still intact
And I start to think that I should be paid
For my all greatest listening act

Submitted: Tuesday, June 28, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, June 28, 2011

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/28/2011 2:33:00 AM)

    Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style.
    Rated it 10.
    TFS.....
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. (Report) Reply

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