Hai! Two Fleas Jammed At The Junction: A Tongue Tie Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Hai! Two Fleas Jammed At The Junction: A Tongue Tie

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Hearts are fiercely fleeting,
jammed at junction as two attracting
poles came together,
like leaves both bodies are pulsating
in spite of the coquettish weather.

Oh! Breaths are butterflying
to keep lamps lighting and sparks flying.
don't think I'm a miss
Because nothing else is more stupefying
than a very jittery first kiss.

The first time we held hands
Shy and lust fought on silver sands
Spreading our wings to fly
to a new world with only she and I,
in first love we fell - oh a tongue tie.


###Copyright © Harindhar Reddy @ 2015###

Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Allegorose: is a shape peom created By chasingtheday of Allpoetry.
It is: Stanzaic: consisting of 3 quintet stanzas (a poem of 15 lines)
Syllabic: each stanza consisting of 6/8/5/10/9 syllables
Rhyme pattern: aabab ccdcd eefef
There is no metric requirement
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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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