howling in the night
like untamed spirits, the owl
alert as ever.
In your haiku poem above, line 2, remove the word owl I think it will give a wider meaning, or a general impression. Any awy I like the poem. I am a poet of 2 books, and presently I am compling a book of Haiku. Copies of my books available on Amazon.
Very amazing haiku shared definitely. Fantastic sharing.10
the owl is very pleased with your haiku beautiful description and well phrased Thanks Asim
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic observation and inference. Enjoyed the haiku. Thanks for sharing.