Haiku - 91 Autumn And Rain Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 91 Autumn And Rain

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life of autumn night
not differ from rainy nights
leaf replaces drops

and loneliness stays
haunting a different way
dry dreams and wet thoughts

dryness sucks the sweat
moisture in air relives stress
never satisfied

Long and silent nights
the bulky sky without lights
cicada and frogs

Haiku - 91  Autumn And Rain
Tuesday, July 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 July 2016

Lovely images of autumn and rain in a splendid haiku series!

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T Rajan Evol 12 July 2016

Outstanding series, M. Asim Nehal, You have put the two, Autumn and Rainy season together, although they differ yet when one is lonely they appear same leaves replaces rain drops..wow Loneliness keeps haunting...Dry dreams of Autumn and Wet thoughts of Rainy season...Amusing Again Dryness and moisture, differentiating both and nothing satisfies...Superb! ! ! ! Silent nights...........Bulky sky with clouds and thunders...Like cicada and Frog........Awesome You are brilliant poet. Hats Off! ! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 13 July 2016

Thanks u so much for lovely analysis and interpretation.

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Kelly Kurt 12 July 2016

An absolutely amazing series, Mohammed. A 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

Nature blessing the earth with water! Nice work.

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