Haiku For My Beloved Poem by Black Mendilouche

Haiku For My Beloved

Rating: 3.5


Sap rising spring-like
A slow stirring of senses
Your touch makes me bloom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lillian Thomas 27 June 2009

hi mendi, i like your take on haiku. very sensual poem. I finally found you! Paul Hansford told me about your poetry maybe a week ago, but the changes in poemhunter make it very difficult to pull up any poet except the most famous people. Maybe I'm just dense, but finally i thought of googling your name and that's how I found you. If everyone else has figured out how to get PH to work properly again, please let me know.

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Susan Jarvis 23 June 2009

Seventeen syllables of sensual seduction - superb! S :)

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful visual metaphor': ''Your touch makes me bloom '' of this short and lovely poem...10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

Lovely piece.

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Paul Hansford 20 June 2009

Very sensuous, but in a restrained way. I like this a lot.

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