The eyes of lovers
locked passionately with eachother-
searching for heart's key
The twin drakes of passion
sail in a lake of love-
lightning flashes to take a picture.
A tide of love
swells in the entwined hearts-
sweeps away life's woes
Anjali
20-06-2009
The twin drakes of passion sail in a lake of love- lightning flashes to take a picture. STUNNING, THANKS FOR SHARING
The twin drakes of passion sail in a lake of love- lightning flashes to take a picture wow what a sweet and done in an innovative way of heart felt idea...really a master piece type..hope you continue writing haikos along with short poems..you have enough comman over doing poems..means you are a real poetess.. other haikos are also good...better to put seperately... one haiko as a one piece of work.. love it..inspiring one..10++++++++++
A true love Haiku written with passion wonderful xxx regards ++++++10
the last lines are really great and dramatic great poet help me too
the imagery in this poem beautiful, thank you for writing it.
Wonderful expressions conveyed with a perfect economy of words. Voted 10.
A tide of love/swells in the /entwined hearts............beautiful lines. this is called magic of words..congratulation Anju for this sweet lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the idea that 'Lightning flashes takes a picture'. It is a truly nice emoscape you have evoked in your writing.