Vincent Dali


Haiku Of The Immortal Beauty - Poem by Vincent Dali

A Rose Petal Fell
From A Beautiful Red Rose
Landed Far Away


Comments about Haiku Of The Immortal Beauty by Vincent Dali

  • Rookie Leslie Ching (2/22/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    'love is like a red, red rose...'

    a simple but poignant and delicate piece...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,723 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/17/2009 8:19:00 PM)

    Perfect haiku...I write them too.this one has great imagery and deep meaning.A ten from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Barry A. Lanier (2/16/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    So much said in this Vincent, , , , , how so much of the beautiful and desirable fall away from us....out of our reach.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Estrella Baldemosa (2/12/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    it has the elements of a good haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ana Zaldivar (1/30/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    A very beautiful haiku poem! I've always tried to write one, but my 3 lines turn into a lot of paragraphs! so I admire you for writting one. very well done!

    ana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hope Wallin (1/25/2009 6:57:00 PM)

    This poem is simple, and yet so pretty. :) Good Haiku! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 24, 2009


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