Haiku (Opaque) Poem by Farah Ilyas

Haiku (Opaque)

Rating: 4.7


Decease memories,
Driven us fast to sparkling,
Realm of backdrop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 03 June 2013

Race you to the lemonade!

0 0 Reply
Yasmin Khan 03 June 2013

lovely play of memories and realm of backdrop, it's nicely penned.

0 0 Reply
Chandra Thiagarajan 04 June 2013

A nice Haiku, Farah which captures the heart!

0 0 Reply
Payal Parande 05 June 2013

bravo ma'am....love the way how you play with your words

0 0 Reply
R.j. Wynn 05 June 2013

Oh, I tot it said blacktop.

0 0 Reply
Subodh Pandey 09 July 2013

lovely write, , , , , , , , , , ...

0 0 Reply
Allemagne Roßmann 08 July 2013

Commendable.Inspirational.A good application.

0 0 Reply
Sallam Yassin 28 June 2013

what not kill u make u strong/bravo Farah

0 0 Reply
Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

wow fantastically wrote this its a truth

0 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 17 June 2013

very true! it's something great to write a meaningful haiku!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
Close
Error Success